First page script

1 INT CAFE - DAY 1

John and Katy are in a café to celebrate

their anniversary.

    

     Over the brunch they talk about Emily’s husband and how

he passed away acting like she didn’t kill him.

DISSOLVE TO

          

     2    EXT. OUTSIDE THE CAFE - DAY                      2

     Katy goes on the phone to Emily (her sister).

          

KATY  

 Hi Emily, are you okay?

EMILY

My husband is dead and you ask if I'm okay. 

KATY

Right. Sorry I was just trying to make conversation.

EMILY                

Well don’t. I know you mean well but you will never understand since you have a husband and I don’t anymore.

     KATY

       I shouldn’t have called you.

     Emily

     (Yelling)

     Yes. You shouldn't have.

    Goodbye.

      Emily hangs up on Katy. Katy sighs and goes back to the 

       Café back to her husband.

FADE OUT

3    INT. EMILY’S HOUSE - NIGHT  3

                       

     Emily was looking for clues and where her husband was before He died and it all makes sense now. Her husband (Rick)

was With Katy and no one else because he said they were working On a project together. That is when Emily found out. Katy, Killed her husband.

          

          

      

Focus Group

 

Sound effects board

Sound effects which would feature in Revenge:

Background sounds

• People chatting

• Coffee machine 

• Phone call ringing 

• Cricket insect sound
• Silence

• Door creaking

  
  

  
  

 

Evaluation of each sound effect suitability for Revenge and a rationale on why I have chosen it:

In the opening scene using cafe ambience, such as people chatting and the coffee machine would let the audience know where this it is taking place and set the scene. And make it more realistic. The cricket noises would again make the scene more authentic as silence in the beginning of the might make it awkward. Using cricket noises also give the viewer the understanding that it is night. However using silence when there is a phone call gives it a sense of suspense and mystery. (e.g. who is Katy calling). Using a creaking door tells the viewer that somebody is making an entrance and in this case it is Katy who is going back to the cafe.